Finally I succeded in writing my first creation in english. It came from the deepest of my heart in just one hour. I was trying for this from the last two years but I think, thought was waiting for the right time to come out from the mind and heart. I tried not to hurt anyone through this poem but if someone feels that 'it hurts' then I am extremly sorry for that.
Finally 'Enjoy the feel underneath'.
They said it was attitude
but I was shy, I wanna conclude
They said I behaved as if dude
I tried not to be delude
but please I request not to judge me by my attitude.
They said you were unvalued at that time
but I wanna say that you will realise my value
if you could understand the deepest of this rhyme
They said I was a bit of nerd and dull and sad
but I wanna show that I was a bit of mad
for that something which I knew that I will never get.
They said I changed a lot
I wanna say this is not me
this is just the people i have joined,lived with and died with
this is what i have got.
They again said I changed a lot
but I wanna say it could be possible, I am the same
and its your thinking or attitude towards me that changed a lot.
They said it was attitude
but I was shy, I wanna conclude
but now I wanna express my gratitude
that your presence in my life brought the attitude, changed the attitude.
Finally 'Enjoy the feel underneath'.
They said it was attitude
but I was shy, I wanna conclude
They said I behaved as if dude
I tried not to be delude
but please I request not to judge me by my attitude.
They said you were unvalued at that time
but I wanna say that you will realise my value
if you could understand the deepest of this rhyme
They said I was a bit of nerd and dull and sad
but I wanna show that I was a bit of mad
for that something which I knew that I will never get.
They said I changed a lot
I wanna say this is not me
this is just the people i have joined,lived with and died with
this is what i have got.
They again said I changed a lot
but I wanna say it could be possible, I am the same
and its your thinking or attitude towards me that changed a lot.
They said it was attitude
but I was shy, I wanna conclude
but now I wanna express my gratitude
that your presence in my life brought the attitude, changed the attitude.
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